Motivation:
Camp Experiences
Learning Objectives:
Level 3
- Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
Level 4
- Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.
Learning goals:
- To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
- A variety of sentence starters
- A variety of sentence lengths
- Edit and rework
- Effective peer checking and feedback
Motivation:
Camp Experiences
Learning Objectives:
Level 3
- Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
Level 4
- Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.
Learning goals:
- To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
- A variety of sentence starters
- A variety of sentence lengths
- Edit and rework
- Effective peer checking and feedback
Motivation:
Camp Experiences
Learning Objectives:
Level 3
- Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
Level 4
- Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.
Learning goals:
- To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
- A variety of sentence starters
- A variety of sentence lengths
- Edit and rework
- Effective peer checking and feedback
Clip,clap my harness getting attached to the rubber bungy as my adrenaline is going mental.
I say in a delicate voice"Krystals ready" and straight away whoosh i was getting swooped into the tree tops like a fat dog running to catch a frisbee. My harness chocking me really bad. Im trying to catch my breath as im stuttering really bad. Then 3..2..1.. SNAP, I scream but it doesn't drop, my heart sinks and shatters like a glass cup being thrown on a firm concrete floor. It chocks me harder and harder but finally SNAP!!! The swing makes me swing so high I scream like a kid getting shots. Sooner then later im swinging and swinging and having good fun like theres not tomorrow to ever come. Funnily enough i thought i was gonna drop on the ground like you do in another activity (Flying kiwi) but nooooooooo you still swing low but not to low. I have another go but still i scream like a big baby and the same experience happens. Suddenly i get off the giant swing and my legs feel like a piece of jello wobbling around on a spoon. So ...... SUPRISE, that was my moment in time on the horried giant swing.
Krystal, great job adding personal voice to your story and great Onomatopoeia in the word SNAP! Must have been scary. Dont forget your punctuation and writing structure when publishing - would be great to see some paragraphs.
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