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Sunday, March 10, 2019

camp story

Motivation:
Camp Experiences

Learning Objectives:
Level 3
  • Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
  • Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
  • Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
  • Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

Level 4
  • Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
  • Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
  • Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
  • Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.

Learning goals:
  • To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
  • A variety of sentence starters
  • A variety of sentence lengths
  • Edit and rework
  • Effective peer checking and feedback








Motivation:
Camp Experiences

Learning Objectives:
Level 3
  • Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
  • Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
  • Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
  • Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

Level 4
  • Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
  • Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
  • Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
  • Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.

Learning goals:
  • To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
  • A variety of sentence starters
  • A variety of sentence lengths
  • Edit and rework
  • Effective peer checking and feedback



























































Motivation:
Camp Experiences

Learning Objectives:
Level 3
  • Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
  • Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
  • Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
  • Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

Level 4
  • Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
  • Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
  • Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
  • Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.

Learning goals:
  • To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
  • A variety of sentence starters
  • A variety of sentence lengths
  • Edit and rework
  • Effective peer checking and feedback

Clip,clap my harness getting attached to the rubber bungy as my adrenaline is going mental.
I say in a delicate voice"Krystals ready" and straight away whoosh i was getting swooped into the tree tops like a fat dog running to catch a frisbee. My harness chocking me really bad. Im trying to catch my breath as im stuttering really bad. Then 3..2..1.. SNAP, I scream but it doesn't drop, my heart sinks and shatters like a glass cup being thrown on a firm concrete floor. It chocks me harder and harder but finally SNAP!!! The swing makes me swing so high I scream like a kid getting shots. Sooner then later im swinging and swinging and having good fun like theres not tomorrow to ever come. Funnily enough i thought i was gonna drop on the ground like you do in another activity (Flying kiwi) but nooooooooo you still swing low but not to low. I have another go but still i scream like a big baby and the same experience happens. Suddenly i get off the giant swing and my legs feel like a piece of jello wobbling around on a spoon. So ......   SUPRISE, that was my moment in time on the horried giant swing.





















1 comment:

  1. Krystal, great job adding personal voice to your story and great Onomatopoeia in the word SNAP! Must have been scary. Dont forget your punctuation and writing structure when publishing - would be great to see some paragraphs.
    - Miss Lamond

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