Its never easy doing a speech especially at a new school. Well done for standing up there and being brave! You have done a great job sorting your writing into paragraphs with a clear introduction and conclusion. You're next step is to use more persuasive language in order to really prove your point.
Its never easy doing a speech especially at a new school. Well done for standing up there and being brave! You have done a great job sorting your writing into paragraphs with a clear introduction and conclusion. You're next step is to use more persuasive language in order to really prove your point.
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